[AFS3-std] rxgk in AFS draft now available

[Derrick Brashear]

Typo in section 9:
"who MAY decided to use a manual"

another
"For rxgk it is, the xdr encoded representation of RXGK_ServerKeyDataRequest"

spurious comma here (or missing one in the reply section; be consistent)

Section 10:
"Only RPCs issued over an rxgk protected connection should receive
rxgk protected callbacks"

I believe this should be a SHOULD. I can conceive of environments
where one might wish to violate this.

Additionally, per offline discussion, section 4.3 should define a
100ns time type and use it for starttime, expirationtime and for
consistency, lifetime. Likewise, the relationship between
expirationtime-starttime and lifetime should be clarified.

Derrick


On Tue, Jan 12, 2010 at 7:29 AM, Simon Wilkinson <simon@sxw.org.uk> wrote:
> I've just published the first draft of the rxgk-in-AFS document. This
> details how rxgk is implemented within AFS, and contains proposals for
> handling departmental fileservers,
> migrating to rxgk, and for securing the callback channel.
>
> The draft is available from:
>
> http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-wilkinson-afs3-rxgk-afs-00.txt
>
> Please review and comment!