[AFS3-std] Last call: DNS SRV Resource Records for AFS

[Russ Allbery]

Tom Keiser <tkeiser@sinenomine.net> writes:

> I'm happy with the draft in its current form.  I do have a few very
> minor typographic nits:

> 1) section 4: I think the "not" should be capitalized in, "They MUST
> not remove leading components to search for more general DNS SRV RRs."

> 2) section 5: It's probably quite obvious, despite being implicit, but
> I'd feel better if the bullet point, "The server provides these
> services over UDP" explicitly stated "Rx over UDP".

> 3) section 5: "<tt> is its TTL" should read "<ttl> is its TTL"

Thank you!  All of these fixed in my copy, and I'll submit a new draft
with those fixes before asking for the document to be advanced.

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Russ Allbery (rra@stanford.edu)             <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>