[AFS3-std] draft-wilkinson-afs3-rxgk-02

[Dave Botsch]

Just started reading this over.

First thing that jumped out of me, in section 5. "Token Format"

grammar: "specific to an particular application" ... an should be a

the statement: the client, which just transmits it from server
   to server

is kind of funky in its wording. I'm guessing this means the client
receives the token from one server and transmits said token to another.

In section 6, " Within a given
   application protocol, a client must be able to locate the key
   negotiation service"
makes it sound like the location of the key negotiation service must be
part of each application protocol (like http).

And "The simplest deployment has the servicce running on every
server"... are we referring to every AFS DB server? Or every AFS server,
period. Or every application server, too?

More later after my conference call with RedHat...

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