[OpenAFS-Doc] pts_membership man page

[Jason Edgecombe]

Russ Allbery wrote:
> Jason Edgecombe <jason@rampaginggeek.com> writes:
>
>   
>> I just submitted bug #124151to RT to add the system:ptsviewers verbage to
>> the man page.
>>     
>
> Thanks for letting me know.  Committed.
>
>   
>> I read the whole pts_membership man page, and the PRIVILIGES section
>> reads like bad stereo instructions. It's not very clear. I think that
>> part could be much clearer, but I don't understand the privacy flags
>> enough to rewrite it. I think a table would better communicate the info.
>>     
>
> I took a shot at rewriting it, trying to make it shorter and more direct.
> Take a look at current CVS and see what you think.  Most of the bullet
> points were just repeating the same thing.
>   
Looks much better and clearer.  I submitted RT #124157 with some minor 
edits.


Jason